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I got a job at Facebook!
So sorry that I didn't update you sooner! I have been working at Facebook for the past couple of months, and the learning experience has been a whirlwind!
It has been an amazing learning opportunity thus far. I am stretched and challenged every day, I don't think I've ever been so excited to come to work every morning.
Thank you, thank you, thank you! for your concise, frank and highly potent guidance."
I hope that you are well. :) I wanted to send you an update - I got a job!
I'm so excited for both the position and the organization and I wanted to thank you for your advice. Less than a week after I made the changes that you suggest, I got an interview."